托福獨立寫作 demo03 In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today
托福獨立寫作 demo03 by David Pai email: ginway2012@gmail.com
TPO 4. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
X2 = 20 years later
C2 = Sharing economy
C3 = rising Environment friendly/ sense of
eco-friendly
C4= the capacity of the public transportation system
In
expression C sets are the ones of Noun or gerund
Remark:
streamline framework (+ plus)
Degree:
will/be/can/could/may/might(Top down)
Cue:
rewriting/paraphrasing the statement can
be a plus
I am pro
to the view that the number of cars, in decades ,shall be on the decline, in
light of below parameter as factors: the
degree of urbanization ,the capacity of the public transportation system
and the
sense of eco-friendly.
To begin
with, with the trend in advance of science and technologies, according to some
literatures, the birth rates are usually on the downturn. My country is no
exception. As historical data prove so, the smaller population can mean the
declining demand of cars. Another supporting evidence is that
The use
of car means a person’s budget
affordable to a maintained car. “With too many descendants “could means
their budget has to be distributed to another use.” With the lower number
multiplier (low birthday) in mathematic equation: the number of cars= the total number of people affordable to cars X the
percentage of them having a desire to purchase a car.
Second,
with the thriving sharing economy becoming
the hit, such as – car pool, the third-party-food delivery --, we
can share a car with multiple passengers/joined purposes , thus reducing the
needs of owning a private car. Take food delivery as an example, in the
past before prevailing, many people drive their own car to buy meals. Nowadays,
more and more people choose food delivery, sending their and others’ food with
one driver. As sharing economy grow in
the future, cars can be share widely, the demand of cars for meals will reduced
with food couriers industry
proliferating
Scoring Strategy:
the mechanism can go a little deeper
Grammar:
objective is more appealing than subjective
For“most
people think” and” many people think”, which is more convincing?
Last,
global warning and energy-shortage issues still is still influential in
contemporary. In particular ,cars consume a lot of energy and emit a lot of pollutant.
As far as we are concerned, many countries release stricter policies to reduce
usage of cars. For example, there exist higher car tax, raised cost of oil use and added pollution emissions fee. Thus, the
higher cost of owning a car, the fewer cars in demand in the future.
In a nutshell, declining birth rate, the
incorporated use of car sharing (sharing economy in car use) , the rising cost
of car use all lead to the trend of diminishing car number
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