托福獨立寫作 demo 09 The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone

 托福獨立寫作 demo 09  

The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone

  by David Pai email: ginway2012@gmail.com

 

 

 

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

 

Y=The degree of relaxation

X1 = Spend time alone

X2 = Spend time with others

 

C1 = inner peace(common factor for everyone or most people)

C2 =the conflict with others

C3=Degree of freedom

 

 

I tend to in favor of those spending time alone make it easier to relax and be stressed less in considering these factors-inner peace, the conflict with others ,and the degree of freedom.

 

 

For the first, as we know/according to the Maslow /according to literature,

inner peace is the key to relax in the security level. In most cases, people need to be a truly self in order to be nature, or feel easy. That’s why we need to rest alone or pick the entertainment self to restore from laborious work at office. As people say,”I need to go home and take a rest”.This expression implicitly explain “home is the one for yourself to stay or play alone, which makes you inner peace”

 

 

For the second, the conflict is the enemy of relaxation. As most evidences indicate, those with conflicts cab be in unsteady mood, much less in relaxation. The more people are faced with  others ,the higher chance of being  uneasier he feels. Chance is that all kinds of conflicts from peers, parents, superiors and there must be increasing  stress behind them.

 

 

Last but not the least,  freedom become a gold rule. Being alone is more likely help develop relaxation than being with others. The latter make you concerned more about others. And Others      become the source of distress. Being freedom can means doing things that you like without too much interference from others’ eye.

 

 

 

避免武斷,增加客觀的方法: “-)”=”better than”

1chance is that --)is

2can be-)may be-)is

3 many/some-)all

4 one of the best--)the best

5 often--)usually--)always

6 as we know

7 from the prospect of views

    8. in some people’s eye

    9. To some degree

    10. In my opinion

    11. Some /many --) all/ Ns

    12. May -) will/is

    13. In some people's eye( 陳述某種觀點 利用此phrase)

    14. One of the best-) instead of the best

    15. In some cases

    16. Several -) many

    17. For some/many  people,

    18. In light of

    

Reminder:1. “C” are crucial factor to relax alone 2. “C” is the common factor